Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

:date:
 

Dreamers vs. Non-Dreamers by *angeleyes2480:iconangeleyes2480:



Dreamers from all walks of life
Fearlessly calling out their dreams to be heard,
Buzzing vigorously like mosquitoes.

I walk past—

Right through all their confident beliefs.

They stop.
Turn.
And stare.
Immediately identifying

A Non-Dreamer

Amidst their self-important merriment.

I destroy their spirit.
Darken their light.
Totally amiss in all of their right.

Assessment piercing like daggers

Daring me to
Fight.
Compete.
Simply disagree.

But no, not me.

A Non-Dreamer.

I merely stop with my hands
Stuffed in my pockets,
My head down.

Standing adrift.

Every Dreamer
Examining
Reconsidering
Waiting

For me to call out my dream,
Make myself heard.

But—

I have no dream.
I have no dream.
No dreams at all.
Don’t you understand that at all?  

I’m just trying to just get by,
When all I really want to do is die…

A sudden noise recalls me,
As I shake my head.

Dreamers from all walks of life
Fearlessly calling out their dreams to be heard,
Buzzing vigorously like mosquitoes.

I walk past—

But—

No one notices.

No one notices a non-dreamer.
With her hands
Stuffed in her pockets,
Her head down.
Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
:iconangeleyes2480:

Author's Comments

So I know you guys are probably :jawdrop: from me actually getting off my lazy-ass and writing something. It’s not really great or anything, but whatever. Just a little something I wrote late last night.

And ugh!! I hate categories! I never know what to put it under. I don't like categorizing my work! :( Hmph!

Oh! And, of course, comments are welcome, and always appreciated! :)

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 1 1 mad 0 0 sad 1 1 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconaranehl:
this is great, i like that theres a real sense of emotion there. i like your style too, straightforward. :aww:

--
...murfke flergen...
:iconangeleyes2480:
Thanks so much, hon! :hug: Your comments are very much appreciated! :heart: :) Thanks again for taking the time to read it! Means a lot! :love:

--
"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-

"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-


"Luke MacDonald, no relation to the restaurant."-Luke MacDonald-

"Any relation to the farm?"-Jason Stackhouse-True Blood
:iconbectard:
:clap:
Words cannot describe how much I love this!

--
Excuse me while I ruin your life,
Just one minute at a time.
Excuse me while I look in your eyes,
And lie to you
Line after line.


~Hey Tiger by the Wherewolves
:iconangeleyes2480:
Spanks very much, luv! Oops, I mean, thanks! :XD: :laughing: ;) No, thanks so much, hon! Always a joy to read your comments! :heart: :glomp: But really, you're being too kind. ;)

--
"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-

"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-


"Luke MacDonald, no relation to the restaurant."-Luke MacDonald-

"Any relation to the farm?"-Jason Stackhouse-True Blood
:iconbectard:
SURE you did...;)

Sorry I could really comment more...I was just completely flabbergasted. You may not believe me, but this is honest to god one of the best pieces of writing I've ever read.

You should really consider bottling your awesomeness, you could get a HUGE amount of money for it ;)

--
Excuse me while I ruin your life,
Just one minute at a time.
Excuse me while I look in your eyes,
And lie to you
Line after line.


~Hey Tiger by the Wherewolves
:iconaranehl:
anytime! hey i'll be in NY this weekend for the comic con, any characters you might like me to hunt down and snap a picture of while i'm there? :aww:

--
...murfke flergen...
:iconangeleyes2480:
:aww: Absolutely!!! Inuyasha, Hellboy, or Sailor Moon! :D Oh, you're so lucky! *SO JEALOUS!* :D Have fun, hon! :)

--
"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-

"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-


"Luke MacDonald, no relation to the restaurant."-Luke MacDonald-

"Any relation to the farm?"-Jason Stackhouse-True Blood
:iconaranehl:
thanks! i'll do my best trcking them down, inuyasha will by a no brainer cause he's first on my list too! :aww:

--
...murfke flergen...
:iconangeleyes2480:
;)

OMG?!?! Ok, now I think I'm going to have an aneurysm!! :lol: :aww: :blushes: :blush: More :blush: Hon, seriously, you're being way too kind! There are so many better writer's than me out there, believe me. Are you drinking? You're doing drugs over there, aren't you?? Hon, you have to say "No" to puffing on the magic dragon! Pass on that grass!! Don't inhale! :lol: No, but thank you very much hon, you're very sweet. :blowkiss: :glomp:

Ha, I don't think I could bottle that kind of stuff. Mine would just more like ooze out and spoil someone's dinner. :lol:

--
"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-

"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-


"Luke MacDonald, no relation to the restaurant."-Luke MacDonald-

"Any relation to the farm?"-Jason Stackhouse-True Blood

Details

February 4
1.6 KB

Statistics

33
6 [who?]
161 (0 today)
6 (0 today)

Site Map